Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?
An abundance and a variety of food has been highlighting the wealthiness of any society. The amount of nutrients required for the humanity is constantly rising. This essay will discuss the primary reasons behind this phenomenon as well as provide some viable solutions to satisfy rising needs.
The major cause of the increase in the food’s demand is the human population, which has been growing exponentially over the past centuries. This means that the overall amount of food that is necessary to satisfy needs of every person and prevent them from starvation changes proportionally, provided that the demand of each individual has remained at the same level. In addition to that, new living standards entails a richer diversity of various meat products in a peoples’ diets, which implies the rise of agriculture purchased by farmers all over the world. For example, according to the study of the United Nations organization, the positive birth/death ratio is a main reason for higher demand on crops and vegetables, especially in developing countries. In other words, the growth of the number of people is considered the primary reason of the phenomenon.
However, the solution exists in regards to the above-mentioned issues. The genetically modified crops are able to address the mentioned problem by increasing the size of a crop and the amount of nutrients inside it. Hence, an individual would consume less food that possesses genetic modifications that ordinary food. For instance, the university of Cambridge has reported that GMO is capable to undertake the entire supply of the humanity keeping the area of agricultural fields the same. Thus, gene engineering can tackle the discussed problem in an efficient manner.
In conclusion, this essay has highlighted the main causes of the phenomenon and suggested a feasible approach for sovling it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31418918919 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.948221211 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.64243759 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210439896967 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061190526674 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525550492924 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123372774058 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379044694319 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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