Describe a time when you made a change in your life.
You should talk about
what change you made
how you made it
the reaction of others to it
And whether you now think it was a good, or bad, decision
Life is full of surprises, it gives uncertain circumstances in humam being life. Some changes are adverse which we can not think as per lifecycle. I am going to explain major change which i executed during the beginning of my career.
As i completed my professional education from ITI Hisar in 2005. End of semester, very reputed organization named (Nestle) came for campus selection and luckily I was selected for internship. I was extremely happy at that time. In spite of, when I started working with company I observed that I am not right person who likes to do repititive activity. I was going towards boredom. One day I decided to moveout from organization, so I resigned from there and came to Gurgaon to join computer related courses.
Consequently, I pursued hardware and networking courses at gurgaon location. Along with, I joined one domestic BPO to grab the salary for sustenance my day to day expenses.
On the other hand, my family members reaction was not appropriate for me. Because they were said, that I should not quit the employer and they inforced me to continue the same, according to my friends and family members, I could grab permanent position there.
Furthermore, today I am successful network and security engineer, also i am earning much more than earlier. In conclusion, I am very happy with my profession and I love to be in Information Technology domain.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
... am going to explain major change which i executed during the beginning of my car...
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...uring the beginning of my career. As i completed my professional education fro...
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...edom. One day I decided to moveout from organization, so I resigned from there a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ful network and security engineer, also i am earning much more than earlier. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92372881356 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90754548394 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661016949153 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1247076492 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4666666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0669962929304 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252787357953 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269899648832 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0340602140105 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324711875728 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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