Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.
Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Nowadays, in this competent era people prefer to work long hours due to multiple reasons. While does such kinds practices, they almost forget about their leisure activities, and spend time on official work, such as reply to emails, preparation of reports, presentations. In contrast, some employees believe in work-life balance methodology.
In discussion, I am going to explain the beneficials as well as demerit of long work hours. Firstly, some person are loving to work more hours, those coming in workaholic category. For them work is the only first and foremost priority, those kind of person does not care about family and children.
Secondly, those persons who has taken loan from bank for their home, shop as well as for business perspective, their mentality is complete the loan the as soon as possible, owing to this, they have to spend more time on office.
Last but not least, some individual want to earn more money in short time, so, while extending in office hours, they can earn more money for their personal expenses.
On the hand, some individuals prefer to maintain the work-life balance, so, they spend quality time with their family members. They keep the coordination between professional and personal life, and takes the leaves, goes to vacations, celebrate the festivals as well as following the interest, such as play a sport, take long walk at park.
Furthermore, work of long hours has pros and cons, I am explaining the same in below paragraphs. Those persons work in office extended hours, they may face, health problems, such as obesity, overweight, breathing problem, depression. As per latest survey, most marriages break due to unavailability of partner. Consequently, marriage relationship reach to the divorce condition.
In comparison, if person maintain the perfect balancing between professional life and personal like, they can achieve the more happiness in their life. Also, they can pursue another hobbies or interest to live their like in appropriate manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...f long work hours. Firstly, some person are loving to work more hours, those coming in wor...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...s the only first and foremost priority, those kind of person does not care about family an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, in contrast, in short, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24223602484 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77370052564 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8435000793 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216180712997 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711680340291 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547503521555 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109329094341 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532020665277 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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