Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents, and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.
Every year, a large number of injuries and deaths causes by road accidents. It could be argued that drunk driving and lenient law enforcement are the main reasons why this happen. Also, there are steps could be taken to resolve the issue.
Driving under the influence of alcohols is one of the main factors contributing to road injuries and deaths. As people tend to unable to control their mind and behaviors while being drunk, in addition to the exciting feelings induced by traveling at relatively high speed, the chances of causing accidents are likely to increase. Another reason would be lax regulation and enforcement of the law. This leads to the fact that potential offenders actually are not discouraged from committing road crime since they believe that they are not likely to be punished, even when get caught, the small fines or sentences do not act as a deterrent to them.
There are many measures governments could take to deal with the situation. Firstly, harsher fines such as license suspension for those driving after consuming alcohol should be introduced. Once people are made clearly aware of the firmness of the law, they will be reluctant to operate vehicles after drink owing to the trouble and inconvenience they can cause for their own. Moreover, traffic law should be enforced in practice with zero tolerance. This made drivers acknowledge that there would be no possibility of them being let go with their presumably minor offense, and they are certainly made hold responsible for their own criminal acts.
In conclusion, it is drivers’ irresponsible behavior and inadequate levels of law enforcement that allows road accidents to increase. Moreover, the government could make the road safer for traveling by strictly regulating road offenses in general and in drunk driving crime in particular.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Every year, a large number of injuries and deaths causes by road acci...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d in drunk driving crime in particular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1711409396 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72688329918 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1079386247 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166571643367 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660711301958 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585277698729 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116509126343 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716987709625 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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