In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impacts of ageing populations.
There has been an accelerating trend of people who live longer in industrial countries nowadays. This trend can cause some negative effects, and some effective solutions should be produced to tackle this problem.
To begin with, there are some negative impacts of the rise in average life expectancy. Firstly, the increase in longevity tends to impose heavy burdens on medical care systems. A clear illustration is that the elderly seem to face health problems such as diabetes or cancers. Therefore, they can frequently need to take care of doctors or hospitals. Secondly, because old people often encounter health issues, it can exert adverse impacts on the job of other family members. For instance, they must devote a large amount of time to pay attention to the elderly. Finally, the tendency of people who live longer can put financial burdens of the state budget. For example, the state must pay a big pension for those individuals.
Governments should come up with some workable solutions to the issue of the increase in lifespan. The first solution is that the authorities should encourage old citizens to follow a healthy lifestyle. For instance, doing exercises every day helps people become more physically stronger. This acts as a precursor so that old residents rarely need to be assisted by health sectors. Additionally, the government can raise the retirement age, this leads to the reduction in money paid for retirees.
In conclusion, some negative influences can be caused by lifespan rise, and some actions should be taken to dealt with this problem.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18359375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71137649544 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.7816864468 49.4020404114 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198309456492 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601599558658 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703965404765 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139010463077 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511871880443 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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