Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism.
Nowadays, many countries around the world consider tourism as a main source of income but this can also bring a lot of problems if it is not managed in a correct way. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this issue and provide a logical conclusion in detail below.
The two main advantages of developing the tourism industry are a boost in the country’s economy and a large number of new job openings for the local people. To start with, the tourists have demanded to find a place to relax and enjoy themselves with their families or friends. It is common to see those people spending too much money on things such as hotel services, food, transportation, and amusement parks. This means communities here have access to great various job opportunities. For instance, on a national holiday, almost all people tend to travel so business owners raise employment more people for position service employees in restaurants, hotels, and others.
Despite the positive effects, an influx of tourists also brings with them many problems. To be specific, more and more people are less aware of throwing rubbish everywhere, such as it is common to see piles of trash appear after large numbers of visitors leave a place. This is not to mention that more business infrastructure dumps the waste into the environment without the exact waste process causing serious environmental pollution. In addition, appealing to many visitors allows local people access to different modern cultures. For instance, they give up usual handcraft jobs to build business infrastructure without thinking because of the purpose of earning much money.
To sum up, when a country opens for tourism, the population will be the beneficiary of the modern facilities and quality jobs in the service sector. However, tourism not only causes environmental pollution but also erodes traditional practices through the dominating influences from the outside.
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...dominating influences from the outside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21086261981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85498968859 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61661341853 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7030548408 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142813593386 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433160068346 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737468716941 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097965482522 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872620506996 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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