Finland may have cold dark winters but the northern lifestyle clearly suits its citizens who have helped put the country at the top of the World Happiness Report for the third consecutive year they were at number five in 2017 With a score of 7 889 Finland | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Finland may have cold, dark winters, but the northern lifestyle clearly suits its citizens who have helped put the country at the top of the World Happiness Report for the third consecutive year (they were at number five in 2017). With a score of 7.889, Finland has once again set the tone for other nations when it comes to factors like social support, a healthy life expectancy, freedom, perceptions of corruption, and dystopia. As a country, Finland offers its inhabitants and visitors access to the water, vast wilderness with national parks and ski resorts, and the country's iconic Lapland region — home to the Sami people, reindeer, and the northern lights.

Citizens of Madagascar — an island off the coast of south-west Africa — are very poor, with 90% of its inhabitants surviving on less than $2 a day. Water and sanitation are a particularly bad, with a sub-index score of just 15.91.

WRITING: CONTRASTING LIVING STANDARD

Of late, the living standards of citizens have been a prevailing concern significant in the world. Also, due to various reasons, developed and underdeveloped countries have obvious differences about this. This essay will elaborate on the contrasting of this issue.
To begin with, the governments in developed countries actually attach special importance to the investment in education, health, and nutrition services. This means citizens are getting their basic needs to reduce serious problems in society such as analphabetic, jobless, and sickness. In addition, this is a helpful human resource that contributes to promoting the country's growth in the future. As a result, people become happier and more comfortable with the quality of their life that could help them escape from poverty. For instance, Finland where the administration will accommodate the resident with useful facilities for supporting a better life is one of the countries at the top of the World Happiness Report for the third consecutive year (they were at number five in 2017).
However, some countries have unfavorable weather and terrain that affect the environment, the health, and the standard of living of their community there. This is not to mention that rapid population growth causes high pressure on socio-economic leading to short of accommodation being forced them to destroy the forest. This means everything is getting so bad that it is hardly easy for earning a living due to having a little bit of knowledge when they don't have access to formal education as a child. For example, citizens of Madagascar who with 90% of its inhabitants surviving on less than $2 are extremely poor, and forcing them must have applied the last resort such as eating insects and fruits or red cactus tubers.
To summarize, I believe that through contrasting between developed and underdeveloped countries, people always want to improve better their living standards. Because achievement is not an overnight occurrence, instead it takes time and effort.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, third, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34482758621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9207857297 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614420062696 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1139682973 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.785714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273372339017 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738761236833 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101703182598 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13231271771 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105345910127 0.056905535591 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, third, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments