Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Throughout history, fresh water has been known as an essential basic need for people in particular that plays a significant role in the world in general. However, in the present, due to various reasons, the scarcity condition of natural resources has become a global problem. This essay will elaborate on the causes of this issue and suggest viable steps that should be taken as a response.
There are compelling reasons for the shortage of fresh water. The main reason is due to the rapid population growth in some areas. It is common to see having a new additional member in the family will increase pressure on the source of freshwater. In fact, rising demand for freshwater which we can not live without. This is not to mention that developed and developing countries promote major industrialization and urbanization. This means freshwater from rivers and lakes is used for manufacturing processes such as chemical reactions, cleaning toxic types of equipment, or swimming pools at the resort.
On the other hand, national management needs to actively propagate to the population that freshwater shortage will be affected globally in the future. It is common to see that couples should have been family planning only to give two babies keeping the global population under control. Furthermore, encouraging people should use vegetarian foods instead of water-intensive foods such as nuts and red meat. Moreover, the government should also find effective techniques for desalination of seawater into clean water, which will help in increasing the growing requirement of fresh water.
In conclusion, the scarcity of fresh water is a growing global issue, there are various means and methods available, by which both the government and individuals can prevent this from worsening.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28873239437 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91228475591 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2403493311 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200239784778 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619854945236 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414477743362 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125460860788 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303863086267 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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