Discuss advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

Essay topics:

Discuss advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

Many people own computers and phones,So people very easy to computers working at home.I think working at home advantages greater than disadvantages.Because now a number of people heavy pressure of work,will cannot keep spirit and healthy body.

I tkink people use computers to working at home have three advantages.Firstly, the people do not need get up early going company,Because morning will arise trffic jams on the road.Thereby will waste more time.Secondly,the working at home will have more time accompany to family.If they nine-to-five to work every day,will unable arrange time reasonable,thus result in job content to decline.Thirdly,the workink at home persons will time is more free .if working at company although have long time for work , but job content do not guarantee.So I think people working at home have many advantages.

I think people work at home also have some disadvantages.Firstly people long time work at home do not exercise, will result in physical quality to drcline.Which leads to a range of health problems.Secondly,If people long time working at home communicate less with others will narrow your circle of friends.

In a word I think working at home advantages outweigh disadvantages,as long as people make good use of their time.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68865129318 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.512570374 49.4020404114 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 268.5 106.682146367 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.0 20.7667163134 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228114450032 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183837761867 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208653562887 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183837761867 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208653562887 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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