Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
What is beyond dispute is that the endless debate regarding whether we should empty our minds alone when we feel gloomy or upset, in modern society, has never failed to cause broad public concern and simultaneously provoke a hot topic among private individuals. Some are inclined to be strong advocates in the extreme claim that we do need solitude to relieve our humor. In theory, perhaps sound and attractive as their perspective seems, but in practice, it can by no means bear closer analysis. Consequently, I, without hesitation, hold the view that talking with your friends is more effective on account of the following evident grounds and examples.
What appears as the first factor is that they can give you some approaches to your troubles. To be more specific, because of the existence of someone who has gone through such a thing that you are facing, so they will enlighten you well. To be better and further supported by the example from one of my intimate classmates, LiHao. He used to insist on dealing with problems by himself, but it always led to a worse situation. Nevertheless, when he generally tried to ask his co-workers or roommates for advice, he finally found out just how brisk he really was. Apparently, this idea may inform us that the more, the merrier.
Most importantly, having a great trip with your friends is more effective. Precisely, we can conclusively reach a sense of enjoyment due to the motivation of sharing. I can think of no better illustration for this viewpoint than the instance from my own experience. When I was a senior student, I had plenty of things to cope with- e.g., Job seeking, Striving for postgraduate school- so I just couldn't adjust myself to this rigid trap. After visiting Beihai, Guangxi, in the company of my close classmates, I got the strength to defeat such difficulties. Clearly, we can learn from the example that spending time with friends can bring you something brilliant.
The group is to all children and adults as the market is to high-quality economic development. Then we cannot fail to try to communicate with our surroundings. Just as Shakespeare has put it, "Strong reasons lead to strong actions."
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ving for postgraduate school- so I just couldnt adjust myself to this rigid trap. After...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, e.g., finally, first, if, may, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92432432432 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87809794345 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640540540541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9952906123 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8947368421 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131672923094 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362638649073 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389111645146 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692730985019 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211701362635 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ving for postgraduate school- so I just couldnt adjust myself to this rigid trap. After...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, e.g., finally, first, if, may, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92432432432 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87809794345 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640540540541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9952906123 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8947368421 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131672923094 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362638649073 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389111645146 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692730985019 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211701362635 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.