Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime

In the sophisticated today’s world where we live, human beings encounter so many problems. Many of these problems affect some important aspects of people’s life. In this regard, some people think they can get these problems solved during their life. Others, on the other hand, believe that it is less likely to get rid of these problems over their lifetime. I, for one, concur with the latter group for two conspicuous reasons that I will elaborate on in the following paragraphs.
One of the most obvious reasons that comes to mind is that in our progressive world administrators and practitioners pay all their attention to making money and do not care about the general public’s benefits. To put it in another word, governments around the world are not responsible for the fate of human beings, and they prioritize their own advantageous. Take global warming, one of the serious problems of today’s world, as an example. The new generation expects governments in all countries to pass laws and do some practical activities in order to decrease the rate of global warming. However, because of the huge financial benefits which fossil fuel provide, they do not cut down using them. In such circumstances, we cannot be positive about addressing the global warming problem during our lifetime.
Another exquisite reason is that most people around the world are reluctant about some voluntary activities which are conducive to have a well-being society. People think about their desires and do nothing to improve the situation of their society. To illustrate, in every corner of the globe there are many poor people that live in bad conditions; they do not access to enough food, proper medicine, school to name but a few. On the other hand, wealthy ones think about luxury products such as expensive cars, big houses, and expensive trips. In this circumstance, social gaps will increasingly grow. In such circumstances, we cannot expect poverty will be managed in society because people do not care about each other’s life.
In conclusion, having the two mentioned reasons into account, I firmly believe that the most crucial problems of our world like global warming and poverty cannot be solved during our lifetime. In our world, not only do governments sacrifice the public’s benefits for their benefits, but also people are not sensible about each other’s life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... making money and do not care about the general public’s benefits. To put it in another word, ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... do not care about each other’s life. In conclusion, having the two mentioned re...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y cannot be solved during our lifetime. In our world, not only do governments sacr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12853470437 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7178668558 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516709511568 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6725999638 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198866544786 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619059902863 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503041049476 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134363407503 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468400550812 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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