Education level of country is very important for it development. There are a lot of factors which have influence on that rate. One of them and not the last in the list is motivation for teachers. I guess, the best motivation is honest salary, but on what it should be depended? I will try to explain my thoughts about it, using my own life experience.
In Ukraine teachers have low level of salary. Amount of it depends on their work experience, education level and working hours. What will be in the result of their tuition doesn’t matter and don’t have influence on teachers earnings. That’s why some of them aren’t interested in quality of their work and don’t want to exert oneself. Only student’s, which are highly self-motivated, are able to have good marks in such occasions. My university isn’t an exception of the rule and just approximately twenty percent of teachers are working on one hundred percent. I think this approach isn’t right at the root.
In my opinion, if your salary is directly connected with result of your work, you do your best. And it goes without saying, that deep knowledge of students in subject is the best mark for teacher efforts. Therefore, it will be honest to test students before and after the course, and if marks are almost unchanged teacher earn minimal level of salary and if it is repeated several times the question of the dismissal should be raised. And vice versa if scores grows greatly, teacher receive bonuses.
I agree with the given statement. And I think education system in my country can be improved by using of such approach.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, i guess, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89855072464 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79187767826 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7694075505 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1111111111 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170721640134 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535572708295 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061497719907 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107371172327 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680345910965 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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