Economic growth in in recent years made some people in both developed countries and
developing countries richer. However, research showing that while people in developing
countries are happier, people in developed countries seems no happier than before. Why?
What can we learn from it?
It seems to be an increasingly widespread concern about people in developed countries is not happier than those who in developing countries, despite that fact that thanks for the advance of economic development, citizens in those countries are richer. In my opinion, the reasons for this phenomenon are dwellers focus to much in creating prospects and overlook the important emotional things.
In the past, we used to spend the time with family and friend to relax and to enjoy comfortable life after work. This is no longer the case. Due to the growth of economy, people must work harder and harder in order to rapidly produce more products, competing with other rivals to keep decent jobs. In the results, time suppose to be used for relaxing and chilling out has been replaced for overtime work.
In addition, people in developed nations not only have sufficient finance to cover their living costs, but also harness the best health care and social system. They are fulfilled with convenient and advanced facilities, so in order to happier they need to consumer higher quality products. But they are using best products and hardly to find better ones. For example, people in developed countries travel by state of the art vehicles and not satisfied due to using this for long time. If they want to replace by a superior transportation, it is possible to tailor, leading to unsatisfied to users.
Throughout this phenomenon, we might learn the way to reach the balance between working time and relaxing time in order to have a happier life. Furthermore, satisfactory with what we have is the essential ideal lifestyle that we should follow. If we already met necessary requirements for good life, we should happy for this and not pursuit other unnecessary things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... for this phenomenon are dwellers focus to much in creating prospects and overlook...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
... keep decent jobs. In the results, time suppose to be used for relaxing and chilling ou...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the best'.
Suggestion: using the best
...r higher quality products. But they are using best products and hardly to find better ones...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...people in developed countries travel by state of the art vehicles and not satisfied due to using...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01694915254 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66733784525 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7580971821 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183251939909 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566131703447 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926189591038 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119479044082 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971763379955 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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