Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?
Since education is a basic human right, it should be free for all irrespective of their socio-economic status. I completely agree with this argument because it is important for survival and if it is limited to the creamy layer population, talents in the lower strata will remain hidden.
Basic human right is something without which a human being cannot survive, and education possesses all the characteristics to be called one. Firstly, an illiterate person may not get any job at all and secondly, a nevertheless difficulty to thrive in the society. For instance, in today’s world, survival without money is impossible, so employment becomes necessary for which the individual must possesses basic education. Thus, it proves to be a fundamental right, when the chain of events of being deprived of it makes survival difficult.
Survival might be a short-term consequence, but the distant effects of isolating poor people from education affect society as a whole. Restricting the opportunity of learning to wealthy sections vanishes many talents than can be nurtured to legendary and Albert Einstein is one such example. He was born to poor parents who worked three jobs a month to make ends meet, but he was provided with proper education by his rich neighbour. Now, the entire world of physics revolves around his theories making an ever greater impact on our everyday lives. If Albert had not been schooled, the technology that comforts our lives would not have existed.
In conclusion, like every other basic human right, education, too, should be free to all. Not only will the survival becomes questionable but denying people of it for being unaffordable also hides many Einsteins forever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('nevertheless') instead an adjective, or a noun ('difficulty') instead of another adjective.
...ay not get any job at all and secondly, a nevertheless difficulty to thrive in the society. For instance,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1847826087 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88191557963 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5274872976 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298425468433 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103487940611 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108643092052 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19223552372 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800176080835 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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