Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education costs are skyrocketing in many countries around the globe, and an increasing number of people have voiced the opinion that education at all levels should be fully funded by the government. I largely agree that education should be free to all students, except for some cases in which students receive specialty training that leads to a lucrative career.
Many governments already choose to pay for education through secondary school because they have decided it is good for society. This is wise public policy for a variety of reasons. An important one is that equal opportunity to receive a basic education promotes social equity. Some students may be wealthy and others poor, but if all children can study from the same curriculum with the same quality of instruction and resources, they at least have a similar opportunity to succeed in school. Government funding of education is the best way to ensure this will occur for all children. Furthermore, in regards to university education, it is a great injustice when a brilliant student cannot attend an excellent university if the sole reason is that his parents can’t pay the tuition. This is one way intergenerational poverty is perpetuated.
However, it is unnecessary for the government to pay for all forms of education, especially advanced degrees leading to well-paying jobs. For example, even though law school is very expensive, some lawyers can earn enough money to pay of their debts in a few short years after earning a degree. Of course, not all lawyers earn a high paycheck. Many choose careers serving the public for much lower pay. Indeed, the government should pay off most, if not all, of the debts for students who choose lower-paying jobs like these. By contrast, attorneys and other professionals who go onto very high-paying careers after graduation should not be subsidized by the government.
In sum, society benefits tremendously by offering its citizens free education. While the government need not subsidize some highly profitable professions, the general benefit of a fully funded education should be extended to all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld not be subsidized by the government. In sum, society benefits tremendously by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, at least, except for, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19590643275 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90903198399 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.849266624 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.529411765 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183422375457 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614498659789 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479234207672 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119733450912 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159204759127 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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