The education of young people is the main priority in countries around the world. Some people believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is essential for the society and more funding should be made available for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is pivotal for the youngster in all countries across the globe. According to some, adults who are not able to read and write should be educated which is vital for the society and more financial support should be provided for them. I strongly agree that education is the right of every individual and should be enhanced in a proper way.
Quality education with proper training should be given in every schools, colleges and university to facilitate the students because education teaches us to distinguish between good or bad, right or wrong etc. Moreover, it develops a sense of leadership, personal growth and reflects our personality and behaviour. Furthermore, education is the backbone of a country’s development as if a country is lacking from good education infrastructure, it is very difficult to complete the race of an economic progress with other nations. For example, the literacy rate in Pakistan is 40% due to the improper plans and developments in education in rural areas.
It is our first and foremost duty to provide better education to those people who cannot read or write. They should be treated the same as others. The culture of discrimination and racisms should be dying out in every country as it shows a positive sign of the country’s evaluation. In addition, more funds should be allotted and more modifications in the studies should be made for these people. For instance, Darul-sukoon is the leading special training care for disabled people in Pakistan funded by many organizations to accommodate the best facilities for their well-renowned education structure and future career perspective.
To recapitulate, I believe that education should be free for all so it can be easily accessible by poor people who are not able to afford the high fees of the institutions. There should be certain enhancements in an education plan for adults to testify their skills and try to give more confidence because these youngsters are the pride of our county and serve it at different positions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...every individual and should be enhanced in a proper way. Quality education with proper trainin...
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Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'economic progress'.
Suggestion: economic progress
... very difficult to complete the race of an economic progress with other nations. For example, the li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12951807229 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04054441907 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2091133742 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.642857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436784815604 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155063614032 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870808293042 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287780011144 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931386811889 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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