Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree?
Motivation is the key for the development and prosperity of the nation's. It is believed by many people that the directors should encourage hired person's by allotting long vocations so that they can do their jobs in appropriate way. However, i disagree with the given statement.
To begin with, if chief executives are granting more holidays to the work men, there will the great loss of the companies as the important works will postponed. Moreover, it will increase burden on labour men when they would come back to office because they will feel frustrated and do not focus on their job. To illustrate, my sister who is lecturer in polytechnic engineering college got twenty day leave from her manager as encouragement, but when she went back to institutions, did a lot of work by taking extra hours and felt stressed.
On the contrary, the head of the department should hold regular meeting with staff members and motivate them by giving real life examples and by giving refreshments on special days. Furthermore, the administration should give incentives to those who performed well at all so that they can contribute for the development and prosperity of their working institute. To exemplify, the principal of my college gives incentives to the teachers who engage students in classroom learning and involve them in different group activities. Additionally, the executive should promote the employees from lower rank to high rank by increasing salary is also the best motivational idea.
In conclusion, my personal prospective is that instead of granting long vocations, incentives, refreshments and promotion are the best motivational sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25283018868 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03361023021 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4757756663 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.545454545 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207056991117 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643566540247 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649271601947 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101744852155 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706536288762 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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