Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people believed that the vanish of some of languages can make little diffience to the sociery. And from my prespective,evev though fewer language can conbine the world closely, i think the existence of rare language is still important.
Only serveral languages exist in the human society can have a convenience to our day-to-day lifves. Firsty, people wil gain more opportunites to communicate with each other so that will keep them more closer with each other from mental. Secondly, using the remain main language can simple the way of learing or traveling when we going abroad,such as it can surely improve people acedemic performace to achieve a certification from abroad university. In addition,people will have a few problems when they get misleading by their poor sense of direction, they can just ask a random people on the street without any language tool.
There are also some negative impacts result of the disappear of certain languages.At first, with the less use of local language,people will lose their sense of self-belongings and have great chance to abandon their native culture, to illuslate, people lived in Singapore for generations are immgraters from China, the older generation can still speak Chinese so that they can have maintain a better connection with other Chinese. In my opinion, it is essential to keep the rare languages lasting in future.
In conclusion,with few languages remaining can have benefits to people on their daily life,but it is necessary to protect the rare language from a long-term of persepective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.224 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0239047604 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.9356583131 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.111111111 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202093775798 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100811939722 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042401691994 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147166200952 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411119967437 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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