Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Disccuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that whether people should make a change during their life if things does not goes on in their satisfaction. From my point of view, try to achieve a better goal may contribute to a better life.
On the one hand, people can improved their ability of resilience with satisfied with present situation. While they developing their work experience in a long period of time, for example, some high level workers became extremely professional in their working area results of day and night hard working, even though the salary is not very satisfied at the very beginning. Also, accept the situation have benefits on mental healthy, as they focus their present life so there will be less pressure to worry about the surrounding environment.
On the other hand, making an effort to life can means more possibilities. People will have more chances to make a difference of their situations, while they try to explore their unknown area and learn new skill, such as blind people trying all kinds of methods and successfully finding their new way of writing or recognizing characters in any situation, so I think essential measures should be taken if people are unsatisfied with their living environment, those experiments could possible have a positive influence on their future life.
In conclusion, while some people think stay in the same situation could make a stable pace of life, but it seems to me that finding ways to improve their life can benefits a lot in the long term of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...ge during their life if things does not goes on in their satisfaction. From my point...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eloping their work experience in a long period of time, for example, some high level workers b...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...ther hand, making an effort to life can means more possibilities. People will have mo...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... finding ways to improve their life can benefits a lot in the long term of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90551181102 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65681239784 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.682989773 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.75 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126030987301 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626735651563 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267062100745 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847573751915 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159723155395 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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