In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In following future, people are argured that there would be no room for traditional media newspapers or writing materials since forks are tend to find materials that they need from internet for free. Since reading from online is more convinent and free of charge, i agree that it can benifits more for the most majority folks.
Firstly, the news from online can be made more detailed and fast deliveried which means people can get to knowledge the information more efficiently and accurately. Secondly, folks can find more book materials or articals from online that they can not find in book shops, also they can even find the latest present book from online shop in first place. Lastly, virural materials do not use paper which can save lots of forest resource, it can benifits a lot to the environment ecosystem.
By contrast, for those who do not have habit to use labour-save device, they might feel very unconvinient to get to know the information that they need. Also, it hits the off-line book stores and newspaper media shops because the revenue will be decrease dramaticaly since only fewer people will still buy it. Thus, the employee from this industry will lose their jobs and struggle with their lifves.
In conclusion, despite the unconvinient for fewer people who do not use internet very often, i still agree that the online newspapers and books is an unstopptable trend in the future. Indeed, it can benifit s more for the most majority of society and environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...rs or writing materials since forks are tend to find materials that they need from i...
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Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e is more convinent and free of charge, i agree that it can benifits more for the...
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st deliveried which means people can get to knowledge the information more effici...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89682539683 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52600483537 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551587301587 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0958002935 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204753310427 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828976256621 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534067549262 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130809718506 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670516041678 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.