Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Due to the globalization, the number of languages around the world is becoming fewer. In my view, this phenomenon can be considered as a positive trend as it can cause people to live more conveniently than ever before.
The elimination of traditional languages spoken by native speakers in different areas can help tourism. In fact, one of the most significant factor deterring travelers to visit some regions is language barrier, meaning that they are less likely to travel to such areas that cannot comprehend their languages well. This condition may become worst provided that there is any translator, which is true in most cases. Therefore, if there are fewer languages, it may be that tourist industry grows, resulting in economic growth, particularly in poor countries which are mainly unknown for travelers. For example, having mastered Persian language, people in Padena, which is located in a virgin area, earned a huge profit as a result of attracting more tourists.
At the same time, similarity in language can bring a range benefits for both employers and employees. On the one hand, job seekers who are competent enough will certainly have more job opportunities providing that their mother tongue does not make them limited. In this way they are able to choose their desirable company, even in another country, without being concern about language barrier. On the other hand, not only can companies attract experienced workers living in various areas, but they also have this chance to work internationally. This is something that we can see in most Australian companies employing the most qualified experts annually.
In conclusion, I believe that resemblance between languages stemming from dying out a number of them can benefit both tourism and industry, leading to a higher quality of life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in most cases, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2397260274 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80853656743 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654109589041 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3877864938 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20066594461 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692237478792 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380424303824 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124946558812 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194260208465 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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