In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and societies? Suggest some measurements that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
It is true that people in industrialized nations expect to live longer than ever before. Although this subject may initially seem as a positive trend, it can cause serious problems for both individuals and societies. However, governments are able to alleviate these conditions by taking some intellectual steps.
As people live longer and populations in modern societies grow older, several worrying issues can be emerged. On the societal level, probably, the main problem is increment in the number of residents drawing their pension, which means that governments should allocate extra budget to meet their needs. In fact, in a right balanced community, in terms of covering various ranges of age, this money is supplied by receiving tax from young adults, which is not possible in an ageing society. From an individual perspective, having been usually disabled and unproductive, old adults are required to be cared. Consequently, a considerable amount of energy and time should be spent by their relatives, leading to have an inefficient fresh workforce in the society.
There are several measurements to tackle problems described above. A simple solution would be increasing retirement age, perhaps from 65 to 70. In some countries, like Iran, people are able to receive pension, if they work only for 30 years, normally after getting 55 year old. Therefore, it seems completely reasonable to make a change in associated laws in order to reduce the future pressure on government's shoulder. A second measure would be considering more budget to establish new appointed nursing homes or improve them, if there are. In this way, not only are ageing populations looked after under high standard of medical care, but also they can be more autonomous.
In conclusion, various simple actions can be taken to cut down the potential negative impacts of populations who are getting older.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2657807309 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85576726524 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654485049834 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4909650005 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206454837488 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603931244458 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317735529734 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114126954132 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250183112833 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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