Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss bot view and give your own opinion.
People have differing views with regard to the question of to what extent new information in various fields should be shared. While some argue that it is preferable to publicize the latest achievements in scientific or financial issues, in my opinion, this kind of information need to remain exclusive.
On the one hand, some people are of the opinion that all scientists, businessmen and professors have this responsibility to share their ideas. They assert that this is an ethical duty for everyone to teach others what they achieved as some famous accomplished individuals like Newton and Einstein did. In this way, it is more likely to witness technological advances or even financial revolutions, stemming from discussing an issue and receiving distinct feedbacks. For example, the reason why a large number of faculties in different universities provided new students with the result of their previous students' thesis is that this can assist them to avoid similar mistakes, resulting in more efficient performance.
On the other hand, the opposite group, including me, believe that this is not true to share some worthwhile information. Firstly, being accessible excessively, scientific efforts may lose their significance. As a consequence, learners or those starting a new business may have less motivation to work hard to resolve an issue as they know that they are able to find the solution readily. Secondly, for a group of people, this is the only way to make a living. Therefore, if they are expected to share their achievements freely, they may face financial problems. For instance, Dr. Nejati, a qualified mathematician in IRAN, had to be involved in farming activities because he could not earn money by employing his skills.
In conclusion, although it seems that sharing ideas can bring some benefits for people, I believe that it would be nor fair if accomplished individuals, who spend all their time and energy on their accomplishments, were asked to share their information free of charge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 494, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... feedbacks. For example, the reason why a large number of faculties in different universities pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22839506173 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02589419268 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608024691358 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3972207877 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.307692308 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199952303148 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708834027597 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598063586611 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130007913669 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353882683097 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.