Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It’s argued that every year some languages is become extinct and it could lead to cause either troubles or improvements. Although some people think that this would lead to an easier life, I do believe that this would cause many serious problems.
To begin with, it's undeniable that by the extinction of several languages, it has opened up chances for business interaction or diplomatic negotiation among nations or continents become easier. In the same way, when there are fewer languages, it would be easier and convenient for people to build up relationships, have a better understanding and spread out information or knowledge.
On the other hand, different societies have different languages. When languages die out, the connection between the past, present and future is cut. There are always traditions, cultures, lifestyles, knowledge, studies communicate through some special languages, despite the fact that we can translate them into our common languages, we are still unable to fully get the meaning and especially the attitude they carry.
Furthermore, languages are keys to culture, just as understanding and valuing cultural diversity are the keys to countering racism. Undoubtedly, the only way to understand entirely the culture and traditions of a nation, a tribe or a country, is to understand their language - which is the inestimable property of the community. language is complexly intertwined with the culture (the have evolved together, influencing one another in process, ultimately shaping what it means to be human). For instance, the Egyptian civilization was born because of language and communication.
To put it simply, as languages disappear, cultures lose. As languages disappear, parts of identity are lost. And as languages disappear, the diversity of world languages decreases. We preserve the endangered species because we want diversity, don't we? Therefore, with extinction of language, could extinct the customs and traditions, that is also the reason for why languages die out will not lead to an easier life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Language
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, to begin with, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05216486136 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600628930818 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3667255115 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319558434129 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096233960849 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063937458151 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156890394084 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718057943809 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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