Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
From the beginning of the world civilization, languages have become one of the most important parts of human daily life. Each nation, ethnic group, country has their own way of communication, has their own unique languages. However, not everything survives from the historical process. Every year, several languages die out. Although some people think that this is not a serious problem because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world, I do believe that the dying process of languages will not lead to an easier life.
To begin with, because of globalization and westernization of the American and European, a wide range of people are forced to communicate in some international languages such as English, Spanish or French. It's undeniable that this has opened up chances for business interaction or diplomatic negotiation among nations or continents become easier. In the same way, when there are fewer languages, it would be easier for people to build up relationships, to help for a better understanding and be more convenient for spreading information and knowledge.
On the other hand, different societies have different languages. When languages die out, the connection between the past, present and future is cut. There are always traditions, knowledge, studies or documents written in some special languages, despite the fact that we can translate into our common languages, we are still unable to fully get the meaning and especially the attitude they carry.
Furthermore, languages are keys to culture, just as understanding and valuing cultural diversity are the keys to countering racism. All individuals must feel free to explore the uniqueness of their culture and identity while developing understandings of the cultural diversity that exists in the world around them. Undoubtedly, the only way to understand the culture and traditions of a nation, a tribe, a country, is to understand their language - which is the inestimable property of that community.
Language and culture have a complex, homologous relationship. language is complexly intertwined with culture (they have evolved together, influencing one another in the process, ultimately shaping what it means to be human). For instance, civilization in Egypt is born because of language and communication. More so Spain has one language because it resembles their identity and pride
To put it simply, as languages disappear, cultures die. As languages disappear, parts of identity are lost. And as languages disappear, the diversity of world languages decreases. We preserve the endangered species because we want diversity, don't we? And that is also the reason for why languages die out do not lead to an easier life ever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Language
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, such as, to begin with, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3986013986 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04701220812 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540792540793 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3163320947 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.272727273 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323356474048 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929983277819 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109080272008 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155032616309 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109700944747 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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