Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career , while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Who should live your own life? You, or your parents?
As long as we can answer that question, there will be no difficulty in answering the question of choosing career better be done by students or parents. Obviously, the answer is students for certain, because students are the one who lives their own lives, they have right to choose, and yes, they have to choose.
First and foremost, except themselves, there is no one (including parents) can understand them as much as they do. We can not deny that parents are experienced, they always want the best for us. However, it is us, the only one who exactly know what you actually need. Therefore, think about what make you interested and choose what you want, because you may spend lifelong to work and earn your living from that.
Secondly, "it is wonderful when the father can meet his dream again from inside the dream of his children.". Unfortunately, things go in an unexpected ways. It is no doubt that every one has their own dream, own interests and own choices. Parents have, students have, but they are rarely the same. If you can, remember that parents are not there with us forever, one day, they have to go. Therefore, as long as we can, fulfill their wishes, however, you still need to fight for your future, because you can live up to their expectations for 5 years, 10 years, but not forever.
Last but not least, in the psychological perspective, students should be at liberty to do what they like. There are some types of parents, who push their children to study the things they want without thinking about the students' feelings. As a matter of fact, many learners adhere to the decision of their parents, even though they have not enough ability to do it. As a result, due to peer pressure on the competitive working environment, they can not only feel the sense of isolation, but also the negligence on social relationships.
It is impossible to deny the role of our parents. With their parents accumulating a range of valuable knowledge in long term, they can have a well-rounded perspective about life. Hence, they can be capable of knowing about the requirements of various jobs and essential features which create the future prosperity of learners.
You only live one life, but if you do it right, once is enough.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...fortunately, things go in an unexpected ways. It is no doubt that every one has thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, no doubt, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77556109726 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62181710144 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528678304239 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.070014988 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0454545455 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516040704327 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202352129804 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264037989151 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0336679040908 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289643083774 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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