Everybody should be allowed admission to universtity or college programs regardless their level of academic ability.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your aswers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experiences.
It is a well known fact that nowadays there are known to be an enormous quantity of institutions that are specialized in providing deep knowledge in various fields of activities. At the present time not everyone is allowed to acquire an education degree but some people think that is definitely compulsory to give everybody an opportunity to receive college programs and university admission despite their level of education skills. However, I partly agree with this statement that it is unquestionably necessary for individuals to be totally qualified in a certain type of profession by having an university degree.
On the one hand, if a person does not have an academic degree from tertiary institutions and colleges it is almost impossible to be hired in splendid company. For example, in some astonishing companies like Google, Amazon or Apple the sections who are in charge of viewing candidates on certain types of jobs can immediately refuse those who don’t have remarkable and outstanding skills in this field, which means that without higher education it is incredibly complicated to get the job. In addition to this, getting higher education can absolutely change your life views as well as you undoubtedly become a well-rounded individual with astonishing abilities.
On the other hand, due to the extremely fast development of digital technologies and the emergency of peculiar and distinctive types of professions the individuals’ views of acquiring an education have significantly changed. For instance, there are known to be a lot of kinds of jobs ,like the professional video editor or the website creator, that do not require an excellent degree. Another gorgeous reason why nowadays it is not critical to receive institute education is that these jobs can be totally competitive in our progressive world.
In conclusion, after various arguments have been considered in details, it seems to me that the choice of acquiring education totally depends on an individual's opinion and various factors that can influence on it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 596, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... a certain type of profession by having an university degree. On the one hand, if...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e are known to be a lot of kinds of jobs ,like the professional video editor or th...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...quiring education totally depends on an individuals opinion and various factors that can in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30153846154 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08598665089 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578461538462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4861886595 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.3 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147813995568 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598144151878 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475529676005 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803585735897 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595525485691 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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