Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together throught communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the difference between cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is a well known fact that nowadays due to the incredibly fast development of modern technology new vistas of remarkable opportunities are totally available for anyone. So, evoking innovative technologies definitely brings outstanding advantages and probably one of them is creating a peculiar method which makes long-term conversations without any serious problems. But there are known to be some weighty problems such as eradicating significant signs of distinction between some cultures. However, I totally agree with this given statement that modern technology creates a way in which individuals can communicate noticeably easy and simultaneously it brings a pooling of unique details between two or more cultures.
On the one hand, there are known to be an enormous quantity of approaches which have been created to allow individuals to be connected with each other just by having access to the internet and some digital device. In addition to this, at present time we can easily observe a major number of astonishing apps with special functions to create conferences for various goals such as communication with people from other countries . For example, Microsoft Company thought over different subtleties of the communication app before its release and this app allows individuals with the identical and similar interest to be on the same wavelength.
But on the other hand, it is widely believed that having an opportunity to check and monitor other cultures' unique traditions, some people start to forget their morales of their culture or country. For instance, when some individual has found another culture’s thing or way to do something he or she begins to implement and inject it into their own culture. And this action leads to explicit change of one peculiar civilization.
In conclusion, after various arguments have been considered in details, It seems to me that it is compulsory not only to continuously develop and evolve modern digital technologies but also to always remember the prodigious things about your own culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3560371517 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00918803335 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622291021672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4523729469 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.272727273 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218393353036 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780435765239 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475072919147 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113824625801 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457095820059 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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