Experts says people were happier and healthier in their past because they did more exercise and spent more time with their family and friends, whereas many now suffering from loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
Due to rapid advancements in the modern world which provide the feeling of isolations and the perilous ailments to humans rather than the earlier periods. However, there are uncountable reasons like hectic schedule, busy in operating latest gadgets and consuming lots of fast foods along with measures such as do regular exercises, eat healthy meals as well as spend time with families and relatives to tackle with this obstacle.
The are multifarious factors of this perception and an initial is that nowadays a huge majority of people are deeply involved in their work life’s to earn more bread and butters. In addition to this, a large proportion of masses are running cat run after getting lots of wealth. As a result, they have not enough time to expand with their families, friends as well. Due to lack of time, they are going far away from their relatives and purchasing a loneliness in a form of rewards. On the other hand, according their busy timetables, they are not eligible to prepare food at homes so that is why they give preference to intake greater portions of junk foods. As a result, of over consumption of fast cuisines they become enduring from obesity which lead to lots of health regarding hurdles. For example, in the western regions, more than a half people’s affected by harmful disease like heart attacks, high cholesterol , blood pressure and etcetera due to their escalating fatness.
Nevertheless, there are various steps to solve this complication and the main is that if people want to be live happiest, longer and healthier lifestyle as compared with past time than they are starting to do regular physical workouts to keep fit own self. Additionally, daily physical activities protect masses from detrimental illnesses and increase dramatically their fitness levels. For instance, yoga is most popular exercise of today’s world which not only offers fitness but also assist humans to well concentrate on their works. Furthermore, it is necessary for people to consume time in their hectic workloads and utilise couple of times with their families and relatives which reduce gradually the amount of isolation among people and make their relationship stronger. In other words, if humans provide their full attention on their dietary restrictions and taking healthy and nutrition meals than a drastic decline can be observed related their health issues as well as healthy food safe them from various disease.
In conclusion , although, it is modern phenomena to do much work to earn income and eat foods who are easier to make but it led to so many health problems. In contrast, today people’s bed eating habits, profound to operate modern tools and so on responsible for their loneliness and health complications. Last but not least, if humans take some integer steps than they solve this problem at some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 469.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13646055437 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71945433191 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556503198294 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5321967852 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.705882353 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5882352941 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1764705882 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294529825372 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915832818952 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460461818098 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166794532329 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652767398686 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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