Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is often argued by some people that certain extreme games, such as parachuting and skydiving are extremely life-threatening, hence should be prohibited. I totally disagree with this viewpoint. I believe that athleticism associated with skydiving can be used by the pilot, and soldiers during wars.
People who argued that extreme sports of these magnitudes are dangerous and should be banned do so because of fear of unexpected accident that may result in fracture, or even death. They suggest that force of gravity, which attracts any object with weights can pull the skydiver down to the ground resulting in breaking of bones. Similarly, there may be a faulty parachute, which can also cause death.
In spite of this, there are reasons for disagreeing. To begin with, one good use of parachuting is in conflict. For example, the Air Force, who are responsible for fighting from air, usually train their personnel on the skills needed to skydive safely from aircraft. So, during crisis these soldiers can jump out of plane some kilometers before the enemy zone line in order to launch calculated missiles to the foe. Furthermore, parachuting can also be important for the pilot. For instance, when something went wrong with aircraft or predicted danger of air crash occurs, the pilot can safely land with the parachute, which allows the parachutist to descend slowly from an altitude. Thus, preventing untimely death.
In conclusion, although some people may argue that extreme sports is dangerous and should be outlawed, I strongly disagree to that as its skills can be beneficial to the pilot as well as soldiers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, similarly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15517241379 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7081503795 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575862068966 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5910963171 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355228993742 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122163389779 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173883359267 0.0667982634062 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27336608465 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20239458596 0.056905535591 356% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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