Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking?
It is true that nowadays there are fewer people who walk daily than previously. This causes by some reasons, and we could encourage people walk more again by addressing these causes.
There are two primary reasons why people walk less than before. One reason is that people use transport vehicles for their traveling rather than walking. These vehicles such as buses, taxis, subway trains enable people to save a lot of time on movement. Furthermore, in high-rise buildings, there are many elevators to pick people up to stages rapidly, this leads to people use elevators instead of stair. The second reason is that widening of infrastructure causes to disappear the walking areas. On the street side, many objects putting on walk way obstruct walking people. For example, the street coffee, bike parking lot occupy illegally street side which it should belong to pedestrians. From all of above reasons, people have a tendency to select a rapid & safe way for their distance.
However, people would come back to walk again if the roots of problems are solved. Firstly, people should be alarmed about health issues if they do not walk everyday. A minimum walking step requirement, which a doctor advise, is 5000 steps per day; if below this number, our body could get some issue after a short time. Secondly, authorities should make more walking route for their citizens to them have more choice in movement. Besides, the obstructions on walkways are also banned to keep these areas freely; therefore, people feel safer and ready for walking.
In conclusion, although people walk fewer today, by encouraging them with given solutions, I believe that they will walk more again in near future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: disappearing
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...about health issues if they do not walk everyday. A minimum walking step requirement, wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4625203109 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2534401498 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372495292346 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124964251917 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819092012998 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251260830905 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473134792577 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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