Figures show that in some countries, there is an ever-increasing proportion of population aged 15 or younger. What do you think are the current and future effects of this trend for those countries?
Nowadays, population problems are clearly something that is often discussed in today's world especially young people which age is more than 14. Here, I would like to account current and upcoming consequences of this phenomenon.
To embark on, there are some strong impacts of that come from the over-population of a teenager. First and foremost, school and university demands are becoming more expensive so that, poor family child can not afford private school education because the institute has met numerous students to full-fill their seats. For a classic example, these days people paid a donation to get admission in an international school that why they can not focus on the poor child even a middle-class child. Besides, presser on the student is higher due to comparison. Parents must do balancing of their child with another brilliant child therefore, children choose other ways and ending their life such as committing suicide.
On the future effect side, it is important to look at subsequent impressions. To begin with, it is fact that the problem of unemployment should be faced in the future because every child obtains education and they compete with other challengers. To illustrate, lots of children complete their education in the medical field, and the opportunity of this is notable so that, their skill value becomes zero. Moreover, the value of products will be increased reason for this is the increasing population.
To sum up, it can be reiterated that this trend has definitely demerits and if an individual can not maintain this problem, it will become large trouble.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18918918919 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81317521159 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0225639104 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133727917271 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049402491634 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375382609443 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815674304155 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210294121902 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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