Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, the smart phones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantades?
In today’s rapidly changing globalized world the issue of immediate access to different entertainments from your pocket devices has become one of the most controversial issue requiring immediate attention. it is undoubtedly that this phenomenon has its pros and cons.
One evident benefit of fast and easy access to the TV series or games is that you never get bored wherever you are whatever you are doing. In other words, you can always enjoy yourself, for example, while you commute from the work in an underground train or a bus or if you are staying in a long queue to a box office. In addition to this, another reason that devices can be an useful aspect that there are many beneficial applications, which provide the fruitful way to learn foreign languages. As is known, in order to learn languages quickly and effectively you need to practice by little portions of information on a daily basis, in this regard scientists recommend to spend 10 minutes per day in lieu of 5 hours once a week. Smartphones precisely ensure a quick access to learning resources whenever you want.
On the other hand, pocket devices is a great source of constant disturbances, they do not allow you to focus on your study and listen to math lections, for instance. As a result, it can lead to detrimental consequences such as bad marks in a school, diminishing of productivity or loosing of concentration on the crucial things. Secondly, it is undoubtedly that these appliances can grab all your attention and consequently occasionally can be result of even cases of emergency. Let us imagine young person is crossing a road, staring at his mobile phone and not noticing an approaching vehicle can be just hit by it.
In conclusion, while there are negative points of using mobile devices an every second, in general it can be very advantageous as long as you are not lost all of your attention and feeling of reality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05898292927 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615853658537 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8813756853 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0833333333 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129466725046 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047325577312 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312255641533 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783275219908 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032625963751 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.