Food product’ labels should contain detailed information about that food. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion? What might be the most important information for food labels.
Hitherto, globalization has led to the outbreak of food production, and questions of whether it is necessary to show detailed information on labels or not and what information is critical to customers have been raising public attention. While some people lament that food labels do not appeal their concerning, I gravitate toward showing concreted detail on any food product and giving foremost detail of those.
It is conspicuous that almost aliment brand in this day and age always centralize the component of food in its labels, in order to mark the legit for customer. The food quality is one of the most issue that people are concerning about, so the concreted detailed labels can consolidate trust of consumers by targeting their mentality. Furthermore, on the economy perspective, food’s labels are also the marketing strategies, helping customers to know which brand manufactured products and heighten their reputation or in-come. On top of that, companies are able to warn customers about the date-end to shield them form being poisonoused. A vivid example was in food market in VN, there was a rush about appealing consumers’ attention, and economists recorded that any businesses that the more detailed labels on their out-come, the more profit they got.
On the other hand, I believe that the upper-most information on labels must be the ingredient inside. Some adults nowadays are allergic by some natural factors, what is more, these factors can lead to some serious illness. In America, experts have recorded many cases that died due to some unsuitable aliment’s ingredient, so the government warn residents to check the labels before owning any products. Having recognized this problem, aliment’s producers try to put the main components on labels so as to show their marketing skills and avoid aftermaths.
In conclusion, businesses must have concreted detail labels on every their products and the most critical information is about ingredients.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, while, as to, in conclusion, what is more, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34294871795 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9071325576 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573717948718 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9752527613 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.916666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365191817414 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134088495077 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764476952498 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230791444251 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771477313842 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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