Nowadays more and more women decide to have children later in their life why Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Unprecedented has there been a phenomenon that females decide to give birth later in their life as it is seen recently. The rational reasons for this issue converge on both building careers and avoiding being under huge financial pressure, which makes the advantages overshadow the disadvantages.
Perceptibly, there are two main factors that contribute to this phenomenon. First and foremost, career has become the uppermost target of women in this day and age. In the past, there was no gender equality, so that women were always treated worse than men, especially in business. Therefore, in the modern era when feminism is more honored, females long to prove themselves by creating prestige in business and gaining more respect from the opposite gender. Second, women can not stay under huge financial pressure. Being impregnated can cost them an enormous budget, so-called pampers, milk and clothes, which can be obstacles in the women’s life. This is the reason for females to save enough money before building their own families.
On these days, this movement can obviously be an advantage owing to health. The more mature the body is, the safer the mothers are. There is news discussing the drawbacks of having a baby at an early age, and the result indicates some potential dangers for both mothers and babies or even mortality. Moreover, a mother who lacks experience and knowledge can deteriorate babies’ health. Inexperienced women do not know how to deal with children’s mental illness and physical injuries whose aftermaths are extremely mediocre for kids’ future. Conversely, the baby can be nurtured properly by a mature mother who has cultivated a wealth of knowledge and baby caring skills.
By way of conclusion, career and financial pressure decide the trend to have a baby later compared to the past, and it is beneficial for both mothers and children.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17704918033 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73318759539 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3096160113 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19493123141 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571139121985 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486186840311 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118271817665 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183913552091 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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