In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Hitherto, the rapid globalization has resulted the demand for using high-tech devices, and the question of whether benefits of auto vehicles dominate drawbacks or not has raising public attention. While many people lament that auto conveyances will mark the critical milestone of technology developments, I oppose to this view by giving some rational evidences.
It is no doubt that there are a plenty of foreseeable advantages of non-driver devices. The convenience is one of benefits that we can not ignore, while prevailing conveyances can only be controlled by human, future devices let us free while moving. We can utilise that leisure time to finish our works instead of driving. On top of that, these modern vehicles can map out the safest and fastest itinerary, which can reduce the rate of accidents. The most vivid example of using this conveyances is in America, there are some cars that can drive without human’s physical strength, however, it still in the experiment stage.
Although these mentioned benefits seem to be rational, it may put human beings at risk in some ways. It is conspicuous that we are expecting too much for this type of conveyance, the fact that these immediate advantages luminate tons of far-reaching drawbacks. The most vivid disadvantage is that because auto vehicles depend completely on technology, some hackers can break in and change our route, lead us to their destination for personal purposes like: kidnaping or robbing our money. Furthermore, even a tiny error in the system can affect our non-driver vehicles, then put us in danger of being injured. One more evidence of why this style of transporting contain many drawbacks is that the country’s economic can be badly affected by this devices. There are a huge number of drivers in this day and age, so the raising of electrical drivers will heighten the unemployment rate.
To summarise, there is no way that auto conveyances’ benefits outweigh their drawbacks unless our sociaty reach their peak of development
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, may, so, still, then, while, no doubt, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16768292683 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87984228687 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9153556325 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145822795332 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478331532954 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277517581736 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777986598344 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386022399939 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.