Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Hitherto, the globalization has result an incredible development of sport industry, and the question While many people lament that it is not critical to be a host of a sport event, I oppose to this view by giving some rational evidences.
First and foremost, there are some foreseeable drawbacks of being a host of sporting event. The financial issue is the uppermost problem for the government to focus on, the expense for competition’s equipment is enormous, which may limit the chance to develop country in future and decrease citizens’ living standard. Furthermore, the centralize of many countries from different parts of the world will heighten the risk of getting dangerous virus. The most vivid example is that in this day and age, India is facing the nightmare of Corona pandemic that kill over a thousand of Indian, or some new types of virus that spreading rapidly in Africa zone.
On the economic perspective, these mentioned disadvantages are easy to be solved by some professionalism solutions. Being a sporting competition’s host in some way can heighten the reputation of the nation, the high demand for diversion games means many tourist come to the host country. The authorities can utilize this chance to spread multi-country friendship, in order to resilient their country from a period of economic instability and even lead their country to the pinnacle of economic development. According to illness issue, every countries reaching the hosting place need to take a 21 days-quarantine and will be taken a sample of blood to analyze virus potential.
To summarize, unless the host ignore the risk potential, it is obviously to organize a sport competition
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19852941176 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.082338558 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6759131511 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243926113497 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094384296534 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736564357146 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149583837814 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706613411022 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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