Full-time education is necessary for all individuals before the age of 18
Many people argue that full-time education should be mandatory for all under 18 year olds. I agree with them.
Today, a quite large number of students quit school. One reason for their quit is plausible at first sight. Their family cannot offer financial support for them to go through high school education, so they start to work earlier to earn wages. But, however forgivable is their choice, labor market would not suspend its preference for educational qualifications. Those school leavers would eventually regret the decision, when they find, although having no difficulty in finding entry-level jobs, they are almost denied access to well-paid jobs that require high skills.
Apart from family financial difficulties, the main problem with those young leavers is that they cannot see the a realistic path between the denial of short-term benefits and a brighter prospect, even though they have been told so over and over again. The only thing to prevent they from making this inevitably regrettable decision is a law by the authorities to demand them stay at school before they finish high school courses.
Another problem too many school leavers would cause is a rise in adolescent crimes. Without the supervision of teachers and restrictions of school rules, teenagers are vulnerable to drug, alcohol and violence abuse. A city would be automatically more dangerous when gangs of youth roam on the street instead of at school. This is another important reason the administration should ban quitting school before 18 year old.
In sum, full-time education should be compulsory for all people aged under 18. However, a new law does not work automatically. Util the government offer universal free education, there would not be a sharp cut in the number of school leavers, because the problem would not have been fundamentally solved, that is to say, many children from poor family will still drop out of school. Hence, the administration should push free education as fast as possible.
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...amily would still leave school earlier. Until school education is reformed to be more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33920704846 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56431562919 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660792951542 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4210239782 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1875 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163182245657 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507620732099 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101827664268 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113015194748 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133952783492 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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