In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driver less The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driver less vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

Essay topics:

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driver-less. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driver less vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

It is predicted that all modes of transportation will become auto-driven in the future. I agree that the benefits of the driver-less vehicles are considerably higher than the hazards.

The advantages of autonomous cars are that it can effectively be used in avoiding huge number of accidents especially those caused by human errors. Driver's drowsiness, DUI and judgmental mistakes contributes more than 75% of deaths due to accident. This can also be used in rescue operations and for research purposes in remote areas. For instance, if there is a natural calamity such as flood, unmanned boats can be used to reach the stranded people. These are some of the significant applications of this future possibility.

On the other hand, it also comprises of certain disadvantages which would be the loss of employment and lack in emotional intelligence. Huge workforce practices driving as their means of living. When all transportation turns autonomous, it will have terrible impact on the standards of living of the drivers and also in the global economy. But there will always be a way to find alternate employment for those who lost their jobs as happened during the industrial revolution The next one would be emotional intelligence.Though most advanced technologies are incorporated in these self-driving vehicles they do not have the basic instincts and emotions. And this can bring an unexpected disaster one day or the other. As we all know, Science keeps on improvising and very soon there will definitely be an answer for this issue.

Juxtaposing the pros and cons of AI vehicles, we can find that the disadvantages listed are not huge enough to hinder such an innovation.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16058394161 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13810043763 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5598034666 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263991541187 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772186365893 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547461041289 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139952588847 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765203815073 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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