In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Owing to the rapid development of technology, everyone now can enjoy the benefit of reading everything online free of charge. Nevertheless, it may lead to the obsolescence of newspapers and printed books as nobody will bother to buy them anymore. From my perspective, at no time will printed books and newspapers become forgotten.
On the one hand, the enormous benefits of reading online are undeniable. Firstly, now there are a vast number of books to read available thanks to the help of the Internet. It is evident that compared to going to a bookshop, we can get access with ease to a much larger number of books to choose from. And the best thing about this is that there is no need for readers to pay any charges. Secondly, reading online gives us an advantage over printed books and newspapers when it comes to convenience. For example, it is much more convenient to read on a portable tablet or kindle at any time and anywhere than to bring a 300-page thick printed book. Therefore, reading books online is preferable to reading printed ones.
On the other hand, printed books, as well as newspapers, will not become obsolete regardless of the popularity of reading online. To begin with, printed textbooks will possibly remain its importance as the primary teaching material in the classroom, as not everyone can afford to buy an Internet-connected device to read for the purpose of studying. Another point to mention is that reading online too much will certainly do our eyes a lot of harm, especially for the old. Because of their deteriorating vision and the fact that they have difficulty getting accustomed to electronic devices, reading online is unsuitable for old people. Last but not least, there exist the so-called bookworms who have a great passion for reading as well as collecting printed books. Therefore, at no time will printed books and newspapers get replaced by online ones.
In conclusion, whereas online books are not only diverse in range but also free of charge, printed books do have some advantages which reading online cannot offer. Hence, in the future, people will continue to buy printed books and newspapers regardless of the enormous benefits of reading online.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97027027027 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76660799454 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3956736677 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340739816589 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11758685795 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530512970195 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228934042039 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248083662143 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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