Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, the rapid development and advances in the modern world mean that it would be hard to live healthily. Nevertheless, many people hold the view that if people genuinely want to get in good shape, they will eventually make it regardless of how their circumstances are. From my point of view, whether people can maintain a healthy lifestyle depends on their willpower, not their circumstances.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that the world has changed radically along with enormous advances and rapid development in technology. As a result, the world of work seems to be more demanding than ever before. Thus, it has apparently become a common sight to see people working long hours, from early morning till late night. Astonishingly, some companies even encourage people to work overtime. Similarly, these days students seem to be under constant pressure from loads of homework as well as assignments. Especially before important examinations, most students tend to burn the midnight oil to study, even stay up all night long. Therefore, it seems difficult to maintain a healthy routine with such tight schedules and loads of work awaiting. Besides, most people do not bother to take exercise anymore owing to the easy access to the Internet. Rather than going outside and do some physical activities, apparently many people prefer to be a couch potato, staring at the screen all day. Conclusively, the modern world does contribute to making it harder to stay healthy and fit.
On the other hand, it seems that people would greatly benefit from the development of the modern world. For instance, there are enormous free lessons available which provide invaluable pieces of advice about how to eat clean as well as basic physical exercises. Moreover, most cities nowadays accommodate a wide range of local amenities, including gyms, swimming pools, sports stadiums, and so forth. Convincingly, people can take great advantage of these amenities to keep fit and stay healthy. However, what counts is whether people are determined enough to maintain a healthy lifestyle. If people genuinely want to get fit and stay in good shape, they will kick the habits that are harmful to their health and set aside some time to do exercise. In other words, as long as people have the willpower to stay healthy, they will eventually succeed, no matter how busy they might be.
In conclusion, even though loads of work and assignments do contribute to making it difficult to live healthily, people can still maintain a good lifestyle as long as they are determined enough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07075471698 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73467362518 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.116628926 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.380952381 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344732558125 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977211409459 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517512803607 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209374937089 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639870394561 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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