GLOBAL WARMING IS ONE OF THE BIGGEST THREATS HUMANS FACE IN THE 21ST CENTURY AND SEA LEVELS ARE CONTINUING TO RISE AT ALARMING RATES. WHAT PROBLEMS ARE ASSOCIATED WITH THIS AND WHAT ARE SOME POSSIBLE SOLUTIONS?
Global warming is one of the most serious issues our environment and human race is facing today since the 21st century and sea levels are uncontrollably rising in alarming rates. A lot of trouble can be brought by this, however, the solution in order to stop or minimize global warming can be done by each one of us.
Global warming happened because of our own actions and all of us who abide in this world are responsible for this. Problems arises and may be irreversible if our wrong actions can’t be stopped. First reason why there is global warming is because of the increase usage of plastics and its improper disposal. For example, the use of plastic bottles, plastic bags, and any other plastic materials in our everyday lives and it’s improper disposal like burning, or throwing it in our oceans which can cause to thin our ozone layer and may cause water pollution. Second problem is the burning of trees in the forest and the destruction of mountains. In that way, trees are not replaced thus oxygen in the air is decreased and may cause floods, landslides and may increase sea levels. Mountains are also destructed for the building of subdivisions and commercial areas that may cause global warming since mountains are essential in sustaining environmental health.
Even though global warming is irreversible, there are still possible solutions for it to be minimized. First, people must start to do recycling and limit the use of plastics. For example, instead of using plastics in the grocery stores, paper bags or environmental bags can be used. Second, the proper disposal of garbage. Separation of biodegradable wastes and non-biodegradable wastes can help identify the waste that can be recycled and the waste that cannot which can also help in disposing it properly instead of just throwing it in the river or other places. Third, to stop deforestation and mountain destruction by implications of strict government laws about illegal logging and burning of forests.
To conclude, global warming are caused by human actions and may be irreversible in the future but with our own little ways it can be minimized by recycling, proper disposal of garbage and implications of strict government laws in order to stop illegal logging and burning of forests.
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...ial in sustaining environmental health. Even though global warming is irreversib...
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...illegal logging and burning of forests.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, third, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03430079156 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80970305472 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498680738786 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9724756896 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159368712178 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598822497498 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843747494901 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123755960456 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108081182953 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.