MANY PEOPLE AROUND THE WORLD ARE CHOOSING TO MOVE TO LIVE IN THE CITIES. WHAT PROBLEMS DO PEOPLE EXPERIENCE IN BIG CITIES? SHOULD GOVERNMENTS ENCOURAGE PEOPLE TO MOVE TO SMALLER TOWNS?
Most people nowadays are choosing to live and work in big cities since opportunities are much more greater than living in a small town and everything is easily accessible in terms of foods, transportations, and shops. Even though residing in a big city is like living a dream, problems are still experienced. In such case, I agree that government should encourage people to move to smaller towns.
Working and living in a big city is a great opportunity for young adults who want to gain competitive work experience, however, difficult situations ae still encountered. First problem faced is overcrowding, since opportunities lies within the city, more people are moving in it which make it congested. For example, people who studied from a countryside university will transfer to a big city in order to work and gain experience once they graduate. Second problem faced is pollution caused by vehicles for public and private transportation that can lead to serious health problems like Bronchial Asthma, COPD, or some respiratory diseases. Third is the high cost of living where most citizens are unable to save money from their monthly salary due to increased tax and expensive stuffs. Residing in a big city is a bit challenging and sometimes exciting but living in a small town is a way better idea especially for the old people.
Government officials are trying to do their best in order to minimize the problems encountered by the people in the big city and one of the solution they identified is encouraging the people to move to smaller towns. With regards to this, they have my support with their plan but I think it’s better if they will focus on the older people who are retired. In that case, In that case, older people can have a quality time in their home town and can decrease the stress levels since living in a countryside gives relaxing vibes and fresh air. I also think that people who have no jobs or business in the city should be encouraged to just to agriculture or farming in the countryside which can also help in the economy and for their personal lives. In that way, crowd and pollution can be lessened and may benefit everyone in the big city.
Therefore I conclude that one of the common problems people in the big city are experiencing are Crowded places, pollution, traffic and high cost of living but with the plan of the government to encourage people, especially the old ones, to move in smaller towns, they can lessen those problems,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'greater' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: greater
...big cities since opportunities are much more greater than living in a small town and everyth...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... may benefit everyone in the big city. Therefore I conclude that one of the common probl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, third, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81690140845 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72556945751 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485915492958 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6133886718 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.8 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408778311235 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147737497505 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112527496187 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284212828784 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698296028518 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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