You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Vaccination for children is widely implemented in our society in order to prevent childhood diseases and to decrease the mortality rate caused by serious health problems. It is often argued that parents should be mandated by law to complete the vaccination of their children against common diseases and if parents should have the right to choose whether they like it or not for their children to be vaccinated regardless of their knowledge about certain vaccines.
I believe that the right for prevention of diseases through vaccination in order to maintain health and fight diseases is important for everyone especially for children. However, it is every one’s right to know the right information, disease process, and the effect of vaccines that can be given to their child. In line with this, I believe that everyone must have the freedom to choose whether they want their child to be vaccinated or not but must be allowed only by law if they understand the risk and consequences of refusing a vaccine. For example, health clinics must first educate the parents on what vaccines do child needs in order to prevent future diseases and its side effects. Moreover, if the health teachings are clear, parents will automatically let their children be vaccinated but still with their own will.
The law is trying their best in order to minimize mortality rates for young children through the help of the vaccines and because of this many vaccines are developed in the laboratory for experimentation of its effectivity. One reason why parents refused their child to be vaccinated is the lack of confidence with the law because of certain issues that happened in the past. For example, the issue regarding the dengvaxia vaccine which killed hundreds of children in the Philippines because of some errors made by the government. We all know that the government wants a positive outcome for developing such vaccine in order to minimize dengue but unexpected circumstances happened. Because of the incident, parents become very cautious and afraidfor their child to be vaccinated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 465, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their knowledge about certain vaccines. I believe that the right for prevention ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12941176471 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78345333296 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6672259476 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168913036247 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735404047338 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447336517636 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135208477898 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436738038431 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.