Nowadays, Global exposure is a passionate prospect which makes many people obtain admissions into universities. Some people argue that even though this phenomenon brings some benefits, it seems better not to go overseas because students might face several problems such as living and studying in various cultures, despite better stay at home. However, I disagree with this statement because Overseas education offers quality education as well as a good career prospect.
To begin with, it is often said that Overseas education offers a standard education to students, so, many people seek admissions there. For instance, Oxford University, London, provides digital education to the students for easy understanding. Therefore, students' academic grades might increases. Similarly, Harvard University, America also provides unique methods for seminars, projects, and even robotic teaching at weekends. Therefore, for all these benefits, students should access education at these kinds of universities.
Moreover, overseas education contributes a standard career prospect to the students. There are many reputed universities which provide placements for people at the end of their study period. To illustrate, Mr. Sundar Pichai, Indian residence studied at Oxford University, was elected as CEO to the Google. In other words, business delegates such as Mr. Satya Nadella and Mr. Anil Ambani, the famous persons who studied at Oxford University. Thus, overseas education aids good career prospects for candidates.
However, some critics say that student might encounter several difficulties while obtaining study in various cultures, due to the above mentioned tremendous merits seem to outweigh the problems.
In conclusion, even though overseas education might cause some problems which may not be considerable, there are immense merits such as quality education as well as an excellent career for the students.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83629893238 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8172828867 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6081225563 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303847898052 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991973850324 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583976676993 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165228613713 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448566789167 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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