Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Some people consider the government investing in the art field is kind of wasting the tax, by contrast, they think the government should invest on the public transit or services. Personally, I am not totally agree with this statement, because art is a part of the human history, it benefit for our younger generation to know our past, and appearsate the gardtitute for our anstentiy.
Frist of all, the investment on the art field is equally important to the public service for the government. That is because art has its own value, is an act that allows us to express our feeling or through, and it’s unique, it contains each individual’s systle. Therefore, it has some certain value for us to conserve it.
Generally speaking, art also is a tool to record our history, so we should preserve it by the government. For instance, the government can invest on the historical building
Meanwhile, the government can also launch a fund to invest on the shock market in order to have a substantiable fiscal resource to invest on the art sector.
On the other hand, the government should also balance between the amount of investing on public service.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'benefits'?
Suggestion: benefits
... art is a part of the human history, it benefit for our younger generation to know our ...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l resource to invest on the art sector. On the other hand, the government should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86802030457 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81170623975 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.555899535 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278770901207 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115803228321 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879510330495 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156111749792 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575742780168 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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