A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, there have been suggestions that the provision of defense service and developing urban welfare is the sole responsibility of the government while the public services such as health care or education is meant to be fulfilled only by the collective effort of citizens or the private organizations in the country. Personally, I assume that the suggestion is not practical enough for the reasons and evidence given as follows.
Indeed, the national security of a state is largely depending on the state since the government possesses the sole authority to enforce the armed forces. With the taxation given by the public and through the systematic allocation of the country's budget, the government will be able to protect its citizens by strengthening military capability or safeguarding the trans-national threats these days such as terrorist attacks. In addition to national security, the government is also highly responsible for the security of other types of welfare namely, educational security or health security of the people. Indeed, some pointed out private entities to finance those security aspects since the citizens are the ones having it.
Nonetheless, it lacks practical terms as the whole governing structure is composed of selected citizens who are capable of bringing a better future for the entire population, only the cooperation between the government and the private groups are more plausible for upgrading the living standard of the country as a whole. For instance, the elites may have the funding to support the public services, however, the sector of rules and regulation, the sustainability of the projects, or the security of the entity cannot simply be ensured by those elites. Undoubtedly, the involvement of government is partially required in order to maintain the reliability or the efficiency of those social infrastructures.
To sum up, it is acceptable that the government has the major responsibility to safeguard the defense welfare of the citizens but this does not translate to the fact that the other social aspects of the country are supposed to be tackled by the public alone. Only by promoting joint practice between the authority figures, private entities and the population as a whole in implementing the infrastructure development facilities can promise the holistic development of the entire nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, nonetheless, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39189189189 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0796594634 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510810810811 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9626854639 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.363636364 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6363636364 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20943643457 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760448193325 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507080328943 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128144198326 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225335058818 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.06 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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