A government’s role is only to provide defense capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As a government’s resources are limited and strategic budget allocation is vital, a government need to consider providing quality services for their citizens. However, some believe that a government should solely prioritize defense capability and urban infrastructure, and all the other services, such as education and health, should be provided by private companies. While others believe that a government should equally spend money on every service and provide a quality service for all.
First, a government should only focus on providing defense capability and urban infrastructure because these services have a direct impact on citizens. The more people would appreciate and benefit from having a stable source of water supply, which is essential for living. It is important to be able to demonstrate a defense capability of the country to the citizens, because of the current international tension. Therefore, a government should prioritize spending money on defense capability and urban infrastructure in order to gain trust from the citizens.
On the other hands, education and health, among the other services, cannot be provided by private companies because it creates unnecessary competition that unable citizens to get an easy access to those services. For instance, pharmaceutical companies can easily increase the price of medicines and it hinders an opportunity for people to access those medicines when needed, if a government doesn’t centralize health services. Hence, other services such as education and health should not be provided by private company, in order to prohibit private companies to monopolize the industry.
To reiterate, it is arguable what service a government should invest more money in. A government should prioritize the citizen’s basic needs, but cannot other factors, such as education and health, that are crucial for their daily living. A government should be careful when considering an allocation of the budgets because each decision has a significant impact on the citizen’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...competition that unable citizens to get an easy access to those services. For instance, pharma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6213592233 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05264635746 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485436893204 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8602028781 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.615384615 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379810043269 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155901587527 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100162819601 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241000905554 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706751250669 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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