The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Film industries are making more crime shows nowadays as they are liked by the public. To reduce the number of crimes in society, the amount of violence in movies should be decreased by the government. I completely agree with this statement because many youngsters learn how to commit crimes from movies these days and shows are portraying criminals as heroes.
In my opinion, young generation is learning a lot from television shows and films as they spend a lot of time in front of computer and television screens. There are different sorts of crime serials aired on television and by watching them unsupervised, children learn different ways of committing felonies from these shows. for instance, if a person wants to learn how to steal something, he will learn how to do it professionally by watching these movies. Not only do they learn how to commit a crime, but they will also learn how to prevent themselves from getting caught.
Another reason why government should reduce movies showing violence is that media depict criminals as heroes. Although, I concede that most of the times the criminals are being caught to prevail justice, but frequently good looking people are being given the role of criminals and by doing so they attract the audience and make the films interesting. Consequently, people try to copy them and take them as their role models. For instance, a recent show named Narcos depicted Pablo Escobar, who was a drug lord, as a hero. By watching this show, anyone would wish to own expensive cars, luxurious lifestyle by unfair means. Personally, I think Only when show like this is banned, will this problem be solved.
To conclude, Not only do people learn new ways of committing crimes, but they also see criminals as heroes after watching such kind of movies so i believe, the government should reduce the crime rate by decreasing the number of crime serials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61628762515 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54375 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8037899488 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174654533185 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667868087341 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720903231166 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123859550657 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568767511171 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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