The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to reduce the amount of violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that in many countries, more people prefer watching foreign films rather than local ones. there are several reasons why those are more enjoyable than local produced films and I think local film industry should be supported financially by government.
there are many factors which cause people find foreign films, which have made in certain countries, are popular throughout the world while films produced by local film-makers have not got much popularity. Primary reason could be that foreign films have high-quality. To make the high-quality films, there are many items, such as good scenario, famous film star, accomplished producers and directors. also, a good music and special effects accompany those items. In my opinion, all of those items and others need a huge-budget. Companies, which are pioneer in this field, access to big budget. So, they can hire excellent film crews from other countries. For example, many of actors and actress, who star in the US, came from other countries, including china, Europe and other regain.
In my view, in each country there are many talented amateur film-makers who need opportunities to show their performance. governments can help them via pay a part of their cost. I have several reasons why they should implement this plan. But I prefer to talk about its economic benefits in this assay. If the local film industry promoted, many people would be hired in this section. Therefore, we can see a decrease in the rate of unemployment, which is one of important macroeconomics indictor. also, local film industry could make a lot of money through film sales. this income will be invested to next projects. By this circle, after a few years this section can make high quality films without government’s help and export them to overseas. As a result, more money will be flowed when local films have good sales abroad.
In conclusion, local films cannot compete with foreign films in terms of local and global appeal. those suffer from low quality. I think this problem would be solved via financial support which should be given by governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15850144092 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66255908956 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561959654179 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3900640985 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8260869565 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0869565217 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78260869565 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894565026169 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288146462701 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242086049163 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643807661726 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124591697604 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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